Excerpt from the NEW Chapter 1 of Into the Flames

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I’ve been working on a major rewrite for Into the Flames because I wanted to try something different with it. Here’s a sneak peek at the newly rewritten chapter one. Enjoy!

Do you have everything?” Eire asked.

As far as I know, Dad. You’re the one who knows better about the core than me.” Fiera ran her fingers through her hair, making the spikes worse. “You supervised my packing so if I’m missing anything it’s because you forgot about it.”

True,” Eire said. He pulled her into a rough hug. “Call me as soon as you reach Bouarus, no matter what time it is. I’ll answer.”

It always felt odd hugging her parents. She was a few centimeters taller than them, standing at just over a meter and a half. She was also slender where the rest of her family was stocky. Her mother Alena called her a throwback to an earlier genetic ancestor.

It wasn’t only her height that she’d inherited. Her face was narrow and angular where theirs was round. Her nose was pointed where the rest of her siblings, other than her twin, had snub noses. Only the shape of her eyes, wide and almond shaped, matched theirs. Eire teased Alena often that Fiera and Phelix couldn’t be his because of their appearance. No one took that seriously of course. Alena and Eire were faithful to each other and everyone knew it.

Fiera drew several deep breaths, cementing in her mind the scent of her father’s clean linen shirt and the spiciness of the chemicals all the farmers used to keep the bugs off. “What if you’re asleep?” Fiera asked.

Then keep calling until someone wakes up and can get me.”

That’ll irritate mom.”

Yeah, well, she can just deal with it.”

Fiera snickered. “You know, the way you two act towards each other sometimes looks more like teenagers dating than adults who’ve been married for, what, over thirty years now?”

About that, yes.” Eire laughed, a deep hearty laugh that made everyone around them smile. “We were married six months before Keoni was born.”

I remember hearing the stories from Gma and Gpa,” Fiera said.

Yes, and they thought it was the funniest thing they’d ever seen, your mom and me racing to the courthouse when we found out she was pregnant,” Eire said.

Fiera chuckled. “I still don’t know how you two have managed not to kill each other all these years, not to mention how many of us there are now.”

With love, respect, and a healthy sense of humor.” Eire smacked her lightly upside the head. “Get moving or you’ll miss the shuttle up. If you do, I’ll be really put out. What I’ve set up isn’t cheap.”

Fiera rolled her eyes. “So you keep telling me.” She kissed him on the cheek. “I’ll call when I get there.”

Eire hugged her again, hauling her head down and pressing his lips to her cheek. “Remember: blend in.”

Fiera Rezouac needs your help

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Death brings new life

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Madalyn let the cold water drift across her skin. Her hair drifted in front of her eyes. She reached one hand up and pushed it out of the way. Her pale skin reflected the dim light that seeped down into the darkness from above.

Madalyn, where are you? The irritated voice in her head caught her attention. It was her father’s fifth wife, a sniveling slime of a female named Zoja.

Madalyn considered ignoring her. She wouldn’t get into trouble for it. Her own mother – an absolutely gorgeous female named Kanani – was first wife and therefore her offspring were sacrosanct as far as her father was concerned.

But ignoring her would upset her mother, and Madalyn knew that wouldn’t be good for her. Kanani was with child again, something the healers had advised against because of her age. Even the long lived Myr reached the end of viable child bearing years.

Madalyn shook her head. I’m here, Zoja. She flicked her tail and swam out into plain view.

You wicked creature. You shouldn’t be hiding from people. Especially at a time like this, Zoja said. She seemed far more agitated than usual.

At a time like what? Madalyn asked.

Your mother has gone into labor, you idiot, Zoja snapped. Madalyn didn’t stick around to hear anything else the other female had to say. She swam off at her top speed towards the network of sea sapphire riddled caves her family called home.

She ran into her brother almost as soon as she entered. Madalyn, where were you? Kiril asked.

Out thinking, Madalyn said. How is it going?

I don’t know. The healers have banned all but daughters from the birthing chamber, Kiril said.

Then that’s where I’m going, Madalyn said. She slid through the water with ease and reached the now guarded door. The healers knew who she was and let her in with only a nod. The serious look on their faces worried her.

Kanani was propped up in the sling, two healers fluttering around her, pressing on her distended stomach and upper tail. Madalyn’s two sisters, Yoana and Orna, were already in there. They held their mother’s hands. The agony in Kanani’s face made Madalyn wonder if she even realized her daughters were there.

Madalyn, there you are. The relief in Yoana’s voice was palpable. I need to help the healers. Come take mother’s hand.

Madalyn switched places with her sister. Yoana was a skilled healer in her own right, and often Kanani said she trusted her daughter over the healers her father brought in any time there was a need for medical aid.

Kanani’s struggle went on for hours. Her hold on Madalyn’s hand grew weaker until her fingers slipped free. Her head slumped down on her chest. The faint touch in her mind that Madalyn had always identified as “mother” vanished.

She’s gone, Yoana whispered into Madalyn’s mind. She was sure Orna was getting the same message.

Now what do we do? Orna asked.

We leave, Yoana said. Before father chooses another first wife. We’ll be relegated to less than servants. Remember what happened to Marlis’ children?

Madalyn shuddered. Marlis had been first wife before Kanani. Her children were too young to flee when she died. They’d been put to work in the worst jobs possible. Madalyn’s half brother – she no longer remembered his name – died from starvation. Her half sister, who’s name also slipped from her memory, had committed suicide after her brother’s death.

Yoana seemed to be conferring with the healers. Madalyn, where are we supposed to go? We have no allies outside of father’s caves, Orna said.

I don’t know, Madalyn said. She did have an idea where she was going. She just didn’t want her older sister tagging along. It was going to be dangerous enough without having someone who didn’t know how to blend in.

The healers will give us one hour to get out of here before they inform father, Yoana said. We have to move fast. The three sisters sped from the room. Madalyn spared one look back over shoulder at the now limp body of her mother before pushing herself even faster to her room.

Madalyn grabbed a bag that would look unusual to any Myr out of a locked chest hidden in her closet. She went over to a case of jewelry on the table next to her mirror and shoved it in the bag. Then she went to the wall and broke off several chunks of the sapphires. She felt the faint vibrations as the organisms died, but she knew dead or alive the sapphires would fetch a good price where she was going.

Madalyn left her father’s cave through a little used path and headed west. She swam for three days and nights, pausing only to catch a few fish to sate her hunger. She reached an area unfamiliar to most Myr, but well known to her.

Taking a few deep breaths, Madalyn surfaced. She kept her gills beneath the water as she looked around to get her bearings. At first all she could see was the surface of the water. She turned to the right. There was the island she’d visited a few times. She dove back under and struck out for it. The surface was going to be painful but it was far better than dying at the hands of her father’s many wives.

 

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Into the Flames – Chapter 1

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As a bonus for my Kickstarter campaign (see the link at the end of the post), I’m offering the first chapter of Into the Flames for free.

Chapter 1

Fiera dropped her lavender duffel on the ground at her feet and inhaled the warm, fresh wind, feeling a pang. She wasn’t even aboard the ship that would take her from Sorus, her homeworld, and she already missed it. Why her dad picked her for this mission – she sighed. She knew the reasons, and even if she thought he was paranoid she knew she was the best one for it. Besides, she got an education out of it, though the location wasn’t one she’d have picked for herself.

A breeze teased her short, spiky hair and sent the tang of rocket fuel and metal to her. Her gaze skimmed the port. There was room for the three shuttles, but none for the huge passenger liner waiting for them at space station above. Beyond the fences, the fields lay green with ripening vegetables. She should be out there, doing her share of the weeding. This felt like a fool’s errand. She’d get into a fight and be blasted home by harvest.

A thud and a chuckle brought her back to the present. She turned to see her father, a small smile on his face, watching her. Eire Rezouac was a man in his seventies, yet looking at him you wouldn’t put him a day over thirty. It was only on closer examination that you saw the white in the dark red hair, the color of which Fiera had inherited. Her eyes though were the same turquoise as her mother’s.

“Do you have everything?” Eire asked.

“As far as I know, Dad. You’re the one who knows better about the core than me.” Fiera ran her fingers through her hair, making the spikes worse. “I still think Phelix would be better for this.”

“Phelix is clever, resourceful, and highly adaptable,” Eire said. “He’s also a little too naive. I need someone whose skepticism matches mine. Besides, he’s more mechanically inclined than you and a shipyard seemed the better place for him.” Eire pulled her into a rough hug. “Call me when you get to Bouarus. I’ve left word that they’re supposed to come get me if I’m teaching.”

It always felt odd hugging her parents. She was a few centimeters taller than them, standing at just over a meter and a half. She was also slender where the rest of her family was stocky. Her mother Alena called her a throwback to an earlier genetic ancestor.

It wasn’t only her height that she’d inherited. Her face was narrow and angular where theirs was round. Her nose was pointed where the rest of her siblings, other than her twin, had snub noses. Only the shape of her eyes, wide and almond shaped, matched theirs. Eire teased Alena often that Fiera and Phelix couldn’t be his because of their appearance. No one took that seriously of course. Alena and Eire were faithful to each other and everyone knew it.

Fiera drew several deep breaths, cementing in her mind the scent of her father’s clean linen shirt and the spiciness of the chemicals all the farmers used to keep the bugs off. “What if you’re asleep?” Fiera asked.

“Then keep calling until someone wakes up and can get me.”

“That’ll irritate mom.”

“Yeah, well, she can just deal with it.”

Fiera snickered. “You know, the way you two act towards each other sometimes looks more like teenagers dating than adults who’ve been married for, what, over thirty years now?”

“About that, yes.” Eire laughed, a deep hearty laugh that made everyone around them smile. “We were married six months before Keoni was born.”

“I remember hearing the stories from Gma and Gpa.”

“Yes, and they thought it was the funniest thing they’d ever seen, your mom and me racing to the courthouse when we found out she was pregnant.”

Fiera chuckled. “I still don’t know how you two have managed not to kill each other all these years, not to mention how many of us there are now.”

“With love, respect, and a healthy sense of humor.” Eire smacked her lightly upside the head. “Get moving or you’ll miss the shuttle up. If you do, I’ll be really put out. What I’ve set up isn’t cheap.”

Fiera rolled her eyes. “So you keep telling me.” She kissed him on the cheek. “I’ll call when I get there.”

Eire hugged her again, hauling her head down and pressing his lips to her cheek. “Remember: blend in.”

“Yeah, got it Dad. Blend in. Love you. Give mom a kiss for me and tell the squirts to behave themselves.” She picked up her duffel, activated the pedal on the grav-sled, and waved as she turned to follow the line to the shuttle. Her father waved back and turned to go. No sentimentality, now that the parting was complete. Her eyes blurred for a moment, but she blinked back the tears. It wasn’t forever, just a few years.

She was stopped at the gate to the landing pad. “Boarding pass please?” a young woman with jet black hair and a perky smile asked. She winked as Fiera dug in her bag. “How long do you think you’re going to last, Fury?”

Fiera gave a half shrug as she continued opening and closing the small compartments. The girl’s question was the downside to living in a small community. Everyone knew where she was going, even those who only had a passing acquaintance with her family. “As long as I can, Jasmina. Dad’s being all serious about this, which means he’s worried about something.”

“I would be too, sending my daughter off to the core.”

“It’s more than that.” Fiera gave a frustrated sigh as she shoved things out of the way, still looking for her boarding pass. “Slag it. Where did it go?”

“Did you put it in your pocket?” Jasmina asked.

Fiera checked her pockets. She found the pass for the liner on one side and the one for the shuttle on the other. “Here you go.” She handed the small chip to the other woman. Jasmina scanned it. There was a click and the gate swung open. “Thanks Jas.”

“My pleasure. Take care and try not to get blasted home. Your dad would be offended.”

Fiera snorted as she made her way towards the small shuttle. High above Sorus’ atmosphere was the passenger ship that would take her from the outer edge of the colonies deep into the central worlds. The liners were too massive to land on a planet’s surface so they relied on space stations and smaller shuttles to bring their passengers to them. The small interplanetary shuttle was her first stop on the long trip to Bouarus, the world at the heart of the known solar system.

Fiera was stopped once more before she could board the shuttle. This time it was so she could hand over her baggage so it could be safely stored. It would be transferred to her room on the liner. Her father hadn’t told her what her sleeping arrangements would be. He’d only told her that he was seeing to it that she could be comfortable as well as useful.

Fiera got onto the shuttle. She picked a seat near the middle and settled in. As she leaned back, she heard a little cough at her elbow. A well dressed woman whose clothes screamed central worlds was staring at her. Fiera caught a whiff of some exotic flower and spice.

“Excuse me, dear, but I think you’re in the wrong seat,” the woman said.

“There are no assigned seats on the shuttle. Besides, it’s wide open. If you don’t want to sit next to me, go pick somewhere else to sit.”

“I always sit in this seat, and you are in my way. Move.”

“No.”

The woman’s nostrils flared. “Do you have any idea who I am?”

Fiera smirked. “A core worlder unacquainted with the idea of personal space?”

The woman puffed herself up. “I am Jaynie Mondadori.”

Fiera raised an eyebrow. “And that’s supposed to mean something?”

“Only an unlettered colonial wouldn’t know my name.” Jaynie crossed her arms across her chest. “Now, either you move willingly or I get one of the staff here to remove you from my seat.”

Fiera looked her in the eye. She reached back and secured the harness, effectively locking her in her seat. “Get fragged.”

Jaynie’s eyes narrowed. “Big mistake, colonial.” She stalked off towards the area where the employees were gathering. “That woman took my spot.”

All of the shuttle crew were from the Duyelia sector. They glanced at Fiera, who waved and smiled, and then back at Jaynie. “There’s no assigned seating. Sit somewhere else,” one of the men said.

Jaynie gaped at them for a moment before storming away. She headed for a seat on the other side of the aisle. She alternated between glaring at Fiera and whatever member of the crew passed by. They paid no attention to her any more than they did to the other passengers. A couple winked at Fiera as they went about their duties, but for the most part she was ignored as well.

The shuttle was barely half full when the klaxon sounded. Those not already strapped in quickly adjusted the harnesses and settled back in their seats. The intercom whistled and everyone looked up. “This is your pilot speaking. Liftoff in fifteen seconds.” Fiera silently mouthed the countdown numbers that appeared on the screen in front of them. As the readout hit zero, the engines roared and she was pressed back into her seat.

The trip up took twenty minutes. Fiera watched out the window as they approached the space station. The scarred metal exterior was lit with hundreds of lights, giving Fiera a good view of the many ships docked there. Most were freighters collecting the cargo from planetside. Their bulky, inelegant design was hardly awe inspiring but they could hold ten tonnes.

Next to them the sleek luxury liner looked out of place. Its hull gleamed in the station lights, smooth and unmarred by any kind of scratch or ding. It was a kilometer long with a design meant to cut through space with little turbulence from the solar winds. An electromagnetic field created a thin skin around the ship, preventing debris from striking it.

From what she’d read in the brochure her father had given her, the ship could hold fifteen thousand guests along with the amenities you’d expect to find in a high class resort rather than on something carrying you through space. This wasn’t something Fiera had thought she’d ever be riding on. Then again, her plans hadn’t included ever leaving the Duyelia sector either.

The shuttle eased up next to the station. There was a muffled clunk as the docking clamps attached. “Docking complete. Please exit the shuttle in an orderly fashion.”

Fiera unfastened her harness and stood. She staggered a little and put her hand out to brace herself on an empty seat. The gravity was less than on Sorus and she felt off balance. She waited patiently for others to pass her, even letting Jaynie out before she moved into the aisles. She went down the ramp and joined the short queue, moving carefully so as not to run into anyone else.

The station was a vibrant hub of color and sound. People were moving between gates, some carrying baggage and others pushing pallets of cargo towards areas that Fiera couldn’t see. There was a sharp scent of oil and the tang of heated metal.

“Last call for Skyliner Lusitania. Please make your way to docking bay five.” The announcement was loud enough to cut across the din of multiple conversations and machinery.

Fiera looked around, trying to orient herself. A young man in the station security’s uniform came up to her. “Can I help you find something?” he asked.

“Docking bay five,” Fiera said. “I’ve got a ship to catch.”

“See the green line on the floor?” He pointed and Fiera nodded. “Follow that.”

“Thank you,” Fiera said. She moved quickly, staggering a little as her body reacted badly to the lower gravity. She crashed into the wall, scraping her arm against the bulkhead. She muttered swear words under her breath as she righted herself and continued on her way.

She reached the lock at the same time as several others who’d ridden up on the same shuttle. Luggage was being brought out and several people made beelines for it, opening their cases and shoving stuff around until they found the boarding passes for the liner. Fiera reached into her pocket and pulled hers out. The stewards and security personnel looked very irritated at those who had to scramble to find theirs.

She watched as Jaynie made it to the front of the line. “Boarding ID please,” the curvaceous blond in the liner’s uniform said.

Jaynie puffed up. “Don’t you know who I am?”

“Yes I do, Councilwoman Mondadori. But in order to log you on board properly we need your boarding pass. This allows us to make certain you are registered as reaching your destination,” the blond said, her dulcet tones matching the sweet smile on her face.

Jaynie flounced off. She pushed a few people out of the way and pulled open one of her bags. A few other people passed by the blond before Fiera got to her. “Do you get that a lot?” Fiera asked as she handed over her boarding pass, jerking her head towards Jaynie.

“People don’t always realize the safety factor involved in presenting the proper credentials,” the blond said. She smiled and looked over her shoulder. “Ruslan, she’s in first class, cabin twenty three.”

A tall, swarthy man who looked older than her father stepped forward. He was pulling a small hover cart with him. “Which ones are yours?” he asked. Fiera found her luggage. He loaded them onto the cart. “Right this way, ma’am.”

Ruslan led her into a lift. It looked to be made of glass and metal. She saw the inner structure of the ship as they crowded in with other passengers. Ruslan pressed the number two on the panel. Fiera saw that hers was the smallest number illuminated.

The door slid shut and the lift started moving. To Fiera’s surprise it didn’t move up or down. It went sideways. Once it reached a predetermined spot it started moving up. It stopped a few floors above and three people along with the stewards helping them got off.

“How dreadful it must be to have to stay in third class,” a woman said to her companion.

He nodded. “I’ve heard their rooms are cramped and they have nothing to do on the ship.”

“All of our passengers have equal access to most of our facilities,” one of the stewards said. “Our rooms are also among the largest in the fleet.” The other two fell silent.

Floor by floor more people got off until it was just Fiera, Ruslan, and one other couple and their steward. They reached the second floor and all of them got off. Fiera paused a moment to take in her surroundings. The corridor was covered in what looked to be real wood panels. The carpet was a deep blue plush and muffled the sound of their footsteps. Metal fixtures gleamed brightly and soft music played over unseen speakers.

“This way please,” Ruslan said, gesturing for her to follow him.

Ruslan took her to a door with the number twenty three secured to the wall beside it. The numbers themselves seemed to be made of gold filigree, and were polished to a mirror shine. Ruslan pulled out a card and slotted it into a machine on his belt. He punched something in and the machine beeped twice. Ruslan pulled the card out of the machine and inserted it into a discreet panel beside the door. It swung open.

Ruslan handed Fiera the card and walked into the room. She followed him in. He ran his hand across the sensor on the wall and the lights turned on. Fiera stopped and stared. “This is not what I expected.”

“Is something not to your liking?” He sounded anxious.

“No, no, everything’s fine. This was just a bit of a shock, that’s all.”

“Ah.” He maneuvered her baggage through another door and slipped it off his cart. “Would you like me to show you some of the amenities of the suite?”

“Yes please.”

He led her around the rooms, pointing out things she might enjoy. “Would you care for a tour of the other luxuries on the ship? You’ll be onboard for a long time and I’m sure you’ll need to entertain yourself outside your rooms.”

“I would love one,” Fiera said.

Ruslan spent the next half hour showing Fiera the luxuries she had access to on the ship. He led her back to her stateroom. “I trust everything is to your satisfaction?”

“It is, thank you.”

“Is there anything else I can help you with?” he asked.

“That seems to be it.” He seemed to be waiting for something. She pulled out her credit chip. He handed her a reader and she scanned it in. She gave him a tip of fifty credits. Her father told her that the staff on the liner would expect to be paid for their services. The balance on her chip reflected that necessity. He smiled and left the room.

Fiera wandered around the suite, running her fingers across the elegant furniture. Everything felt real. She knew the core could do amazing things with replicators, but the wood in the furniture felt as if it came from trees and not a lab. The warm earth tones were soothing and did a lot to ease some of her uneasiness.

Fiera sat down on the couch and pulled up the entertainment menu on the holo. She found a movie she’d heard of but hadn’t seen because it never made it out to the colonies and turned it on.

Two and a half hours later, Fiera turned off the holo. “Well, that’s time I won’t get back,” she muttered. She looked at the clock. According to the ship’s schedule, it was time for dinner. She was hungry since it had been a while since lunch. She got changed into one of her nicer outfits, a deep sapphire blouse with cut out shoulders and an empire waist. It was matched by a skirt that fell to her ankles the same shade as the top and a pair of sandals made of dyed leather.

The dining room was on the same floor as she was. It had a grand entrance with double doors flung wide open. She walked inside. There were several people already there. Each was dressed in elegant clothing that belied their central worlds origins. There were a few who were dressed as simply as Fiera was, showing they too were from the colonies.

She didn’t recognize any of the colonists but saw that they were congregating on one side of the room. The core worlders were gathering on the other. Fiera made her way over to the group from the Duyelia sector.

“Oh, I am so glad to see another colonist,” one of the women said as Fiera joined them. “The core worlders outnumber us fifty to one.”

“You’re exaggerating, Moyna,” one of the men said.

“I am not,” Moyna said. “Look at how many are on their side of the room compared to us. Not to mention there are more of them coming in.” She turned to Fiera. “I’m Moyna Zuiderduin.”

“Fiera Rezouac.”

“Eire’s daughter?” one of the other men asked. Fiera nodded. “I’m Klas Burgstaller.”

The others introduced themselves as well. “That’s a lovely outfit,” Moyna said. “It brings out your eyes.”

“Thanks. You look good in yours too.”

Fiera heard a familiar voice and turned to look. Jaynie was holding court with a dozen other core worlders hovering around her. “You would not believe the rudeness of the colonials on the shuttle,” she said. The woman was far from svelte, and the garish pink dress with its many sequins just served to make her look like some bizarre dumpling with sprinkles. Fiera nearly choked herself on her laughter.

“What’s so funny?” Vladislav, the first man to speak, asked. Fiera told them. There were a few soft snickers. “Don’t let her hear you saying that. She’s a member of the Assembly and can cause all sorts of problems for you.”

“I suppose that’s why she expected special treatment when we were getting on then,” Fiera said.

Klas snorted. “I saw a few of the core worlders try that when they got on at the same time I did too.”

“I didn’t think there were this many core worlders in the colonies,” Fiera said.

“Most of them were already on the ship,” Moyna said. “They’re here on a tour of the colonies. It’s a fairly popular vacation package apparently.”

“Some had actual business out here and were looking for a comfortable way to deal with it,” Shyamala, one of the other women, said. “I’m guessing that’s why the councilwoman was out here. I can’t see someone like her taking a vacation in the Duyelia sector.”

“There was this terribly rude red haired woman who wouldn’t get out of my seat,” Jaynie said. Fiera saw her sneer as she looked at the colonists. A look of confusion appeared on her face. “How are you here? This is for first class passengers only.”

“I am a first class passenger,” Fiera said.

“There is no way a colonial could have enough money for first class,” Jaynie said.

“Councilwoman, I’ll have to ask you not to insult our other passengers,” a tall, imposing man dressed in a smart uniform said. His buzzed hair was gray and the close cropped beard matched.

“And who are you?” Jaynie asked.

“Captain Owain McDougall. All guests are welcome aboard my ship, regardless of where they come from.” He smiled at the gathered passengers. “I’m glad to meet all of you who are just now joining us. Please enjoy the amenities of this ship and I hope you all have a pleasant journey.” He took a seat at a table near the front of the room.

That seemed to be the queue for everyone else to sit. Fiera sat with the other colonists. The waitstaff came around and placed food and drinks in front of them. “This soup is amazing,” Shyamala said. “I am constantly surprised by the ingenuity of their chefs.”

Fiera took a sip and almost spit it out. “Don’t be. This has replicator food in it.”

“How can you tell?” Vladislav asked.

“The chemical aftertaste.” Fiera took several swallows of her drink.

“This is a core world ship. You’re going to have to expect some replicated food,” Klas said.

“I didn’t think about that,” Fiera said. She finished her soup, suppressing her gag reflex. A short while later the next course was brought out.

“Is this one replicator food?” Vladislav asked.

Fiera tried everything on the plate. “No, just poorly seasoned. Their chef used too much salt and not enough of the other spices and herbs.”

“You know a lot about food,” Moyna said.

“My mom was a professional chef for a while before she had kids. She taught all of us a lot about food prep, meal planning, stuff like that. I also started cooking for her when she needed a break.”

“If you cooked everything from scratch, how did you get replicator food?” Shyamala asked.

“There are a few people on Sorus who either can’t or won’t learn how to cook properly so they have the feeds. One of them is a really good friend of my dad’s. Every time we’d get invited over to their house for a meal I’d spit out the food and refuse to eat because I could taste the fact it was replicated. The first few times I didn’t know that they had the feeds, or even what replicators were. I just knew the food tasted awful. Dad figured out why I was responding the way I was and the visits stopped. They started coming to our house for meals.”

“With how expensive this trip is, you’d think they would use all fresh ingredients,” Shyamala said.

“Even core worlders can’t afford everything,” Klas said.

“They’re cutting corners to ensure their profit margins,” Fiera said. “That’s typical core worlder tactics.”

“Klas, why don’t you tell Fiera about what you do for a living?” Moyna asked. “I think she’d be interested in it.”

“I own a shipyard,” Klas said. “What’s interesting about that?”

“What shipping line do you build for?” Fiera asked. Klas answered her and the rest of the meal was spent talking about ships and their component parts.

After dinner, Fiera joined the others in a game of cards, which went on until she was too tired to continue. She returned to her cabin and stripped out of her clothes. She hung them up and pulled on a sleep suit. She pulled back the blanket and laid down on the bed. She sank into the mattress, her head supported by the pillows. She stared out the window at the stars. For a moment she wondered what it would be like to do this for a living, sail among the stars. She snorted. She preferred solid ground under her feet and the scent of green and growing things. She closed her eyes and drifted off.

She woke up, feeling refreshed and ready to do something active. A quick glance at the clock told her that she had an hour until breakfast. She decided to wait until after she’d eaten to do anything. She went into the bathroom and took a quick shower. She pulled on a pair of black pants and an emerald green top. She sat down to watch a holo while she waited for breakfast.

Fiera joined the other colonists for breakfast. She noticed there were fewer people over on the core worlder’s side. “Is it my imagination, or are there some late risers?” she asked.

“There’s an open bar on the ship. Most of them stay up late drinking and talking about what they consider to be important matters. We’ll see them in here for lunch, if they’re awake by then,” Klas said.

Breakfast was a protein heavy meal, for which Fiera was grateful. “So what are everyone’s plans for today?” Shyamala asked.

“I’m going to let breakfast digest a bit and then go swimming,” Moyna said. “Then I’ll read for a bit next to the pool before lunch.”

“So your usual,” Klas said. Moyna laughed and nodded.

“Vladislav and I are going to go play a few games of chess. Anyone want to join us?” Klas asked. The others shook their heads. “What are you going to do Fiera?”

“Wait for my food to digest and then go check out the gym,” Fiera said.

“You’re probably going to run into a lot of core worlders there,” Klas said.

Fiera shrugged. “That’s true of wherever I go on this ship.”

She saw a flash of pink and turned to look. Jaynie was just stumbling in. She was dressed in a matching shirt and pants of the same garish pink color as her dress from the previous night. This time it didn’t have sequins, but was equally as eye burning with neon green stripes.

“Does that woman not have any style?” Moyna muttered.

“I don’t think she cares,” Shyamala said with a small giggle.

“She looks ridiculous,” Klas said.

Fiera finished eating. “I guess I’ll go find something to do while breakfast settles.”

“Why don’t you come watch us play?” Klas asked.

“Watching you two is about as riveting as watching paint dry,” Shyamala said with a laugh.

“We’re a little better than that,” Vladislav said, glowering at the other woman.

“Sure. It beats sitting alone in my room,” Fiera said. The others quickly finished and scattered to their separate pursuits.

Klas and Vladislav were skilled chess players and Fiera was anything but bored watching them. She waited through two games before standing up. “Are you leaving us?” Klas asked.

“Yeah. I’ve had too much sitting,” Fiera said.

“Enjoy your workout,” Vladislav said. Fiera waved and walked out.

Fiera went back to her room. She rummaged through her luggage and came out with a pair of shorts and a t-shirt. She changed clothes and made her way to the gym.

There were a few people in there using the various machines. Fiera looked around. There was a corner set up with automated targets for hand to hand combat. She went over and fiddled around with the controls until she had it set at what she thought she wanted. She hit the “activate sequence” button and got down to work.

The setting she’d chosen was the one designated for those with an intermediate skill level. She made the first move and the battle with the machine was on. Twenty minutes in and Fiera hit the button that told the machine she was done. The servos wound down and the automaton went still. Fiera hit the reset button, as the instructions printed on the wall said to do, and wiped the sweat off her face. That had been one of the hardest workouts she’d done.

“Leave it to a colonial to favor something so crude as fighting,” a familiar voice sneered. Fiera turned towards the sound. It was Jaynie.

“Hey, this is a core worlder’s ship. If it’s here, someone from your sector must use it,” Fiera said.

Jaynie glared at her. “We prefer central worlds or our names.”

“We prefer colonists or our names as well. Since you don’t give us that courtesy most of the time, why shouldn’t we do the same to you?” Fiera hopped off the platform and started towards the door.

“Just as I thought, completely uncivilized,” Jaynie said. There were several snickers as the rest of those in the gym watched the two women.

Fiera raised an eyebrow. “So what are you here to do?”

“Run the track of course. That’s what any proper woman would do.”

“So glad I’m not what you’d consider proper then. Running is boring unless there’s something worthwhile at the end,” Fiera said. She ignored Jaynie’s sneering laughter and left the gym.

A fast shower later and she felt somewhat human again, though she still seethed. She was toweling off her hair when someone knocked on her door. She walked over and peered out into the hall. It was Moyna and a few of the others from the colonies.

She opened the door. “Fiera, we were wondering if you’d like to join us for a game? We were thinking one of the multiplayer strategy games.”

“That sounds like fun,” Fiera said. “Come on in. I just need a minute.”

The others walked into her stateroom. She ducked into the bathroom and tossed the wet towel into the appropriate bin. She ran her fingers through her cropped hair and called it good. She rejoined the other colonists. “Are you any good at strategy games?” Shyamala asked as they headed out the door.

“I’m okay at them. My brother Phelix is a whiz. I play him all the time. He beats me three out of five games. Even my dad has a hard time winning against him.”

The others led her to the gaming room. They settled into comfortable chairs. Moyna activated the unit and the multi-level board appeared. Everyone chose their tokens and the game began. Early on Fiera linked up with Moyna to work on defeating the others. She was knocked out of the game quickly by Shyamala, but in the second game she managed to edge out the others to win. The group continued playing, laughing and enjoying themselves until lunch.

Lunch was still more of an informal affair and the group split up afterwards for more personal entertainment. Fiera went swimming and then settled in to watch a holo in her cabin. Dinner was the same formal meal as it had been the night before. She sat with the other colonists, learning about where they were from, where they were going, and why they were going there.

Seven weeks passed before the ship made the change into the central worlds. There was a subtle shift that the colonists could feel. They reached Ismillon first.

Fiera watched as Moyna packed everything up. “We’ll miss you,” Fiera said.

“It’s been a pleasure getting to know you,” Moyna said. “I’m just glad I’m getting off here. I don’t think I could deal with the supercilious attitudes from the core worlders anymore.”

“You’re going to be living on a core world. You’re probably going to be getting that every day,” Shyamala said.

“My sister lives in an area that’s full of colonists. I shouldn’t have much trouble,” Moyna said.

“Well I envy you,” Fiera said. “I’ve got another ten weeks on this thing.”

“That’s right. You’re headed into Bouarus. What is it you’re studying again?” Moyna asked.

“Nanotech with an emphasis on its medical applications and Intergalactic Studies.”

“That’s going to take you a while, isn’t it?” Moyna asked.

“Yeah, seven years, unless I drop one of them. Or manage to not frag myself by taking a lot of classes.”

“Be careful in Sio, Fiera. It’s not safe, even for the core worlders.” Moyna piled her bags on top of her grav trunk. She activated the hover field and dragged the luggage out of the room.

“Stay safe here, Moyna. Good luck with your sister.”

“Thanks.” Moyna waved and joined the others disembarking. There were quite a few, though Moyna was the only colonist leaving the ship.

Fiera made her way back to her suite. She got in and flopped down on the couch. She ran roughened fingers over the soft rust colored fabric, feeling it catch on the ridges of her skin. She leaned her head back and closed her eyes. The recycled air on the ship was lightly perfumed with a floral scent. It gave her a low level headache.

Someone knocked on her door. She stood and opened it. Shyamala and Klas were outside. “We were wondering if you’d like to come join us in the lounge,” Shyamala said.

“I’m not interested in drinking and listening to someone belt out songs in a poor imitation of music,” Fiera said.

“It’s not that bad,” Shyamala said. “At least the one tonight isn’t. She’s actually got a sense of rhythm and pitch.”

“I’ll pass,” Fiera said.

“Then what are you going to do?” Klas asked.

“Probably work out again and call it early,” Fiera said. “My usual.”

“You’re wasting your time onboard. You’re supposed to be enjoying a vacation from your real life until you don’t have a choice but to take it up again,” Shyamala said.

“I’m going to be stuck on Bouarus for the next seven years, unless something happens. Don’t you think that’s enough of a change?” Fiera asked.

“Yes, but you’re going there to work,” Klas said. “This is supposed to be for pleasure.”

Fiera sighed. “Okay, okay. I’ll come with you.”

The other two grinned. “We’ll wait for you to change,” Shyamala said. Fiera closed the door and changed into one of her better casual outfits. She joined the other two and they made their way to the lounge.

The next ten weeks passed with the number of colonists growing fewer and the number of those from the central worlds increasing. Fiera expected to be harassed for being from the colonies, but aside from some snide comments from Jaynie, she was left alone. The stewards and other staff were attentive and respectful, and the captain even invited her to dine with him at one point to discuss some of his business points in the colonies. It was a far cry from what she’d expected when she boarded.

She was finishing her breakfast when the intercom whistled. “We are in orbit around Bouarus. Everyone debarking must be at the shuttle bays in ten minutes,” Captain McDougall said.

Fiera grabbed her gear and headed out of her cabin. It took her a few minutes to find the shuttle bays. There were so many people waiting for the shuttles. She got in line and waited.

“What do you think you’re doing? This line is for people needing to go to Bouarus.” Jaynie was dressed in another garishly colored outfit and all but drowned in a floral scent that burned Fiera’s nose.

“If I’m in line, what does that tell you?” Fiera asked.

“That you’re an idiot.”

“If I’m an idiot, how did I get into the University?”

“You didn’t get in. No unlettered colonial would ever be able to pass the entrance exams,” Jaynie said. “Besides, there’s no way they’d enroll you when there are dozens of more deserving young people fighting to get in.”

“Well, it’s been proven that those of us in the colonies are more intelligent than you core worlders. How else would you explain the disparity between my intellect and the process of those from the central worlds with even a modicum of education not being allowed entrance to one of the most influential universities?”

Jaynie looked blankly at her. “What did you just say?”

“If you can’t work it out for yourself, you’re not as intelligent as you seem to think you are,” Fiera said. The line shifted and Fiera moved forward, ignoring Jaynie’s spluttering.

Her ticket was checked and the steward let her onto the shuttle. She settled into one of the seats and waited for everyone else to get into place. A short while later, she heard the familiar chime. “Good afternoon passengers. We will be landing in Sio in approximately forty five minutes. Please be patient as we must wait our turn in line to disengage from the liner,” the pilot said.

A short while later, the shuttle lifted up and eased itself out of the docking bay. Fiera watched out the window, getting her first look at her new home. She was both disgusted and awed by what she saw as they made their descent to the landing pad. It was late afternoon and the suns blazed down through the clouds.

Sio, the main city on Bouarus, was a sprawling mega metropolis. It took up half the smallest continent, spanning just over 2400 kilometers. Fiera saw minuscule spots of green dotted in certain areas of the city. The skyline was dominated by towering buildings. The man-made structures spiraled into the sky and were high enough that they had to weave its way through them.

The shuttle landed. As soon as the signal was given, everyone released their harnesses and got up. The gravity was even less than on the liner. Fiera waited for the crowd of eager central world citizens to exit before getting up and heading out herself. She stumbled more than once as her body tried to accommodate this new environment.

Fiera went to the luggage claim area and snagged her bags. She almost lost her hold on her trunk as the lighter gravity threw her off balance again. She steadied herself and walked towards the doors. As she passed security, she noticed Jaynie speaking to one of the staff. A Port Authority security officer came up to Fiera. “Excuse me, miss, but if you came in from that shuttle you have to go through decontamination before you’re allowed to enter the city.”

“Why is that?” Fiera asked.

“It’s not known what kind of viruses or bacteria come in from the colonies,” the man said. “You have to go through decon to protect the residents. Can you imagine what would happen if a disease from one of the colony worlds broke out in the city?”

“Absolutely nothing, since your medicos would just whip up a cure within the first few days of the illness hitting the streets,” Fiera said.

“Your things will have to go through their own decon. If any of them are found to be contaminated, they will be destroyed and you will be responsible for replacing them,” the agent continued, guiding Fiera towards a series of booths.

“Isn’t that something the Port Authority should pay for?” Fiera asked.

“It’s a risk you take visiting the colony worlds,” the agent said. One of the others took her bags from her. She was shoved towards a booth. “Step inside and hold still. The process will only take a few minutes.”

Fiera did as she was told. As soon as she got in, the booth closed and locked behind her. Glowing rings repeatedly ran up and down her body until she was tingling as if she’d been out in the light of the twin suns with no time in the shade. The door unlocked and Fiera was able to step out.

The agent handed her a small bag. “Where are my things?” Fiera asked.

“Your credit chip and your pad are in there,” the agent said. “The rest of your belongings were full of hazardous biological material.”

Fiera noticed Jaynie was watching the situation with a smirk on her face. “There was nothing wrong with my clothes and personal effects. You destroyed them because she said I was from the colonies,” Fiera said, eyes narrowed.

“Be glad we left what you’re wearing. You’re free to go now. There are shops in town where you may purchase new things. If you’re going to stay in the central worlds, you should learn to accommodate our way of life,” the agent said. He pushed her away and turned to the next person.

Fiera let out a string of curses under her breath as she stalked out of the terminal and into the city. She hailed an auto cab and climbed in. A computerized voice asked her what her destination was. Fiera pulled up the notes on her pad and typed in the address her father had given her. The cab lifted off the ground and eased itself into traffic before heading deeper into the city.

Setting Into the Flames Into the Sky

Setting Into the Flames into the sky

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This is going to be one of my rare self-promo posts. Specifically a plea for people to back my Kickstarter campaign. I need money to self-publish Into the Flames. I’m asking for $2000 to be able to pay for everything I think I’m going to need, plus some extra to make up for things I don’t know I need yet. So if you think you can help, here’s the link below:

I have two backers so far, and I have some awesome (at least I think they’re awesome) rewards for my backers at various levels. So if you can, please help me get my book published. Thank you in advance. If you can’t, please think about sharing this around with people you think might be interested.

100 POSTS! And a little more

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Photo via tookapic via Visual Hunt

WOO! THIS IS MY 100TH POST!

I started this blog last October. I’ve been blogging since 2010, and I have some interesting posts on my old blog. But I wanted something more from my blog that I couldn’t get from Blogger, so I came here. Even after a year, Google still refuses to admit this blog exists and constantly refers people back to my Blogger blog. There is a link to this one in the final post on the Blogger one, but if you want to find current information for me, you have to use a different search engine. It’s sad, given Google is the most popular search engine in the world, that you can’t rely on it to be accurate.

But I’m not here to talk about Google. I’m here to talk about me. I seem to spend a random amount of time talking about my life on here. Sometimes I talk about life on the farm, my struggles with mental illness and physical health, and my writing. Other times I just post stories. However I do it, I’m trying to get the blog posts up on a semi regular basis. I like blogging. I just never know what to post, so you get the interesting musings of my incredibly random mind.

Now, onto the writing career update. I’ve been working on a short story for a bit called “Death’s Day Off.” It’s my submission for Zombies Need Brains LLC’s The Death of All Things anthology. It’s based on the personal mythology of my fantasy world, so it’s not gong to be the usual story they’d get. At least I hope it won’t. It’s under the 7500 word count limit. I sent it off last night. I won’t know until closer to the end of February if I’ve been accepted or not, but I’m a little scared and a little excited.

I’ve completed the next draft of Into the Flames, formerly known as Fury. I’m needing to go over it one more time before sending it off to a beta reader or two. I’m currently working on Return to the FlamesItF‘s sequel. It’s going slowly as I’m having an argument with my characters over who the POV character is going to be. The woman who was the POV character in ItF wants to be the POV in RttF. But her husband makes better sense as the POV character for RttF. So we’re going to wait and see what happens.

I have an appointment with my neurologist this week. Unless something drastic comes out of it, I probably won’t talk about it any more than this. Farm life moves on. Spring will bring with it some new challenges, and as they happen, I’ll document them here along with everything else.

As a final note before heading off for the day, please come support me on Patreon. I’m going to start posting patron-only short stories and (bad) poems, blog posts that you won’t see here, and more updates on my writing career there. I’ll also be posting other random bits of things there before they hit here, so if you want the first scoop on things as they happen, please think about sponsoring me there.

Everyone have a wonderful week and I’ll see you on Wednesday!

Fury: Winterklaas, Part One

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(As it’s the holiday season, I’m writing stories celebrating winter holidays in several of my worlds. This is the world of Into the Flames/Return to the Flames. Eire and Alena are the parents of my MC in both of those stories, and here’s when my MC is a little girl.)

Eire looked out at the frost covered ground. There was no snow on Sorus. That was something he missed about being on Bouarus. Winter had been his favorite season. The sports that came with the ever present frozen water that came in the coldest months were one of the things he truly enjoyed, and not having access to them out here was difficult.

You’re brooding, Eire,” Alena said, coming over next to him. “What’s wrong?”

Eire smiled fondly at his wife. The two of them had already been married for a few years, but it still felt like they were on their honeymoon. “I was just missing the winters I grew up with,” he said. “I loved snow sports and there aren’t any here.”

I haven’t seen snow in years,” Alena said. “Not since we moved off Icrtara. Sometimes I miss it too.”

Mama, pick me up?” Phelix, Eire’s four year old son, ran towards his parents. He tripped and fell. He was stunned for a moment and then began to howl.

Alena sighed. “Phelix, you’re okay,” she said, walking over and scooping her four year old son. “Was there something you want?”

Presents?”

Eire and Alena laughed. “Tomorrow, bratling,” Eire said. “You have to be patient.”

Are we going to decorate?” Phelix asked.

After dinner,” Alena said. “We’ll all help make the house look pretty.” Phelix squealed happily and then squirmed to be put down. Alena set him back on the floor and he took off running, most likely heading for his room to tell his twin sister the news.

Are your parents coming for the disemboweling of the gifts?” Eire asked.

Eire, that’s a horrible way to put it,” Alena asked, still laughing. “Though rather appropriate, given Keoni and Phelix’s way of opening their packages. Yes, they said they’d be here at 0830.”

Then we’ll have to keep the bratlings entertained until they get here. You know they’ll be up long before that,” Eire said.

I picked up three holiday e-vids for them. Hopefully those will be enough to hold their attention,” Alena said. She glanced at the time. “I need to go start dinner.”

Do you want some help?”

No, I can manage. Why don’t you go see what kind of mischief the three of them are getting into?”

Eire laughed as he headed upstairs. He loved his children. Keoni, an active six year old, took a great deal of pleasure in tormenting his younger siblings, though it was all in fun. Phelix was a loving little boy who adored his twin sister and idolized his brother. Fiera, Phelix’s twin sister, was a feisty little thing who often had fits of temper as wild as anything Eire had ever seen. But she was also a sweet and loving little girl, and to be honest, she was Eire’s favorite out of the three.

Eire got upstairs and poked his head into Keoni’s room. His oldest was quietly building a model of a solar wind passenger liner. It was one of his birthday gifts from earlier in the year, given to him by his grandparents. He’d been working on building it for several months and was making real progress on it.

Keoni looked up and grinned. “Phelix already told me when we’re decorating.”

Dinner should be ready soon,” Eire said.

Okay.” Keoni went back to work.

Eire went to the twins’ room. The twins were sitting on the bottom bunk, Fiera’s bed, and were holding a pad between them. Fiera was reading slowly, sounding out words she didn’t recognize. Eire realized that she was telling Phelix the story of Winterklaas. He listened for a moment as she stumbled over some of the longer words as she explained about the earliest settlers in the Duyelia sector and how they’d been eager to celebrate their first winter on their new world. A huge party had been thrown, even though the planet was covered in snow, and all the children were given lots of presents. Eire choked back his laughter. That part was definitely added by his daughter. He didn’t want to disturb them just yet, and continued listening.

Fiera, what do you want for Winterklaas?” Phelix asked.

Presents,” Fiera said. “I don’t know what I want exactly. I just want presents.”

Me too,” Phelix said. “But I do want one thing.”

What’s that?” Fiera asked.

A harvester,” Phelix said. “A little one, like what Keoni has.”

The one he won’t let you play with?” Fiera asked. Phelix nodded. “Maybe Mama and Dada got one for you.”

I hope so.”

So, are you two ready for tomorrow?” Eire said, stepping into the room. The pad went onto the bed and Fiera threw herself into her father’s arms. Eire scooped her up and kissed her on the cheek. “Mama is cooking dinner now. Gma and Gpa are coming in the morning to see you open presents. So I hope you’re all excited.”

Uh huh,” Fiera said. “I like presents.”

I haven’t met a child yet who doesn’t like gifts,” Eire said. “Dinner should be ready soon. Are you hungry?”

Phelix nodded. “My tummy is rumbling.”

Eire laughed. “Then it’s definitely time for food. You two go ahead and keep playing until it’s time to eat. We’ll come and get you.” He set Fiera down, ruffled Phelix’s hair, and left the room.